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Resume & Cover Letter Review

The consultant reviews the job seeker's resume and cover letter, providing feedback on content, keywords, and formatting to better align with the target roles and stand out to recruiters.

Dialogue

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Consultant (Male)
Alright, so I've had a chance to look over your resume and cover letter. Overall, you have strong experience, but there are a few areas we can refine to really make them stand out.
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Job Seeker (Female)
Great, thanks! I'm eager to hear your feedback. I want to make sure they're as effective as possible for the marketing manager roles I'm targeting.
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Consultant (Male)
Exactly. For your resume, let's focus on quantifying your achievements more. Instead of saying 'Managed social media campaigns,' try 'Increased social media engagement by 25% through targeted campaigns.' Recruiters love numbers.
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Job Seeker (Female)
That makes sense. I sometimes struggle with putting exact figures, but I'll go back and dig those up. What about keywords?
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Consultant (Male)
Good question. We need to make sure the keywords from the job descriptions you're applying to are woven throughout your resume and cover letter naturally. For instance, if 'SEO optimization' is mentioned frequently, ensure it appears more than once in your documents.
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Job Seeker (Female)
Right, for the Applicant Tracking Systems. I've heard that's really important. And for the cover letter, any specific advice on tone or content?
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Consultant (Male)
For the cover letter, keep it concise and personalize each one. Avoid generic statements. Directly state why you're a perfect fit for that specific company and role, drawing clear connections to their needs.
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Job Seeker (Female)
Got it. So, tailor everything more tightly to each application. This has been incredibly helpful. I'll make these adjustments and send them back to you.
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Consultant (Male)
Excellent. We're aiming for impact and relevance. Once you've revised them, send them over, and we can do a quick final check before you start submitting them.

Vocabulary

Essential words and phrases from the dialogue

refine

To improve something by making small changes to make it better, like editing a document for clarity.

stand out

To be noticeable or impressive among others, often used when you want your resume to catch attention from employers.

eager

Feeling very interested and excited about doing something, like being eager to get advice on a job application.

quantifying

Expressing achievements or results using specific numbers, which helps show impact in resumes.

achievements

Successful accomplishments or things you have done well, important to highlight in job applications.

keywords

Important words from a job description that you include in your resume to match what employers are looking for.

personalize

To customize something for a specific person or situation, like changing a cover letter for each job.

concise

Short and clear, without extra words, which is key for professional documents like cover letters.

tailor

To adjust or adapt something to fit a particular need, such as tailoring your resume to a specific job.

Key Sentences

Important phrases to remember and practice

Overall, you have strong experience, but there are a few areas we can refine to really make them stand out.

This sentence gives positive feedback first with 'overall' for summary, then uses 'but' to introduce suggestions. It's useful for polite professional advice, showing balance between praise and improvement.

I'm eager to hear your feedback.

This expresses enthusiasm using 'eager to' followed by a verb. It's a natural way to show interest in opinions during consultations or meetings.

Let's focus on quantifying your achievements more.

Uses 'let's' for collaborative suggestions in imperative form. Helpful for giving advice on resumes, emphasizing the importance of using numbers to describe successes.

Recruiters love numbers.

A simple declarative sentence with 'love' to express strong preference. Useful in job prep to explain why data matters; it's informal and memorable.

We need to make sure the keywords from the job descriptions you're applying to are woven throughout your resume and cover letter naturally.

This uses 'make sure' for necessity and 'woven throughout' idiomatically for integration. Key for ATS advice, teaching how to include words smoothly without repetition.

For the cover letter, keep it concise and personalize each one.

Imperative 'keep it' gives direct instructions with parallel structure 'concise and personalize.' Practical for writing tips, stressing brevity and customization.

Tailor everything more tightly to each application.

Uses 'tailor...to' verb phrase for adaptation, with 'more tightly' as adverb for emphasis. Useful when discussing customizing documents for specific jobs.

This has been incredibly helpful.

Past perfect 'has been' with intensifier 'incredibly' to thank someone. Common in professional thanks, showing strong appreciation after receiving advice.