Giving Feedback on a Creative Work
One person shows their creative work (e.g., a painting, a short story, a simple melody) to another and asks for their opinion. The other person offers constructive feedback.
一个人向另一个人展示他们的创意作品（例如，一幅画、一个短篇故事、一个简单的旋律）并征求意见。另一个人提供建设性的反馈。
对话
聆听并跟进对话
词汇
对话中的必备词汇和短语
striking
Something that is very noticeable or impressive, often because it's bold or unusual. Use it to describe art that catches your eye right away, like 'The colors are striking.'
某物非常引人注目或令人印象深刻，通常是因为它大胆或不寻常。用它来描述立即吸引你目光的艺术，比如“颜色很引人注目。”
capture
To express or represent a feeling or idea in art. In creative contexts, say 'This painting captures the joy of summer' to mean it shows that emotion well.
在艺术中表达或表现一种感觉或想法。在创意语境中，说‘这幅画捕捉了夏天的喜悦’，意思是它很好地展现了那种情感。
convey
To communicate or make something understood through art or words. Useful for discussing if a work shows the intended message, e.g., 'The music conveys sadness.'
通过艺术或文字传达或使某事被理解。有助于讨论一部作品是否传达了预期的信息，例如，“这首音乐传达了悲伤。”
composition
The arrangement of elements in a painting or artwork. It's a key term in art feedback, like 'The composition makes the scene balanced.'
绘画或艺术作品中元素的排列。这是艺术反馈中的关键术语，例如‘构图使场景平衡。’
perspective
The way objects appear smaller as they get farther away in a drawing. Use it when giving advice on realistic art, such as 'Good perspective makes it look three-dimensional.'
物体在绘图中随着距离的增加而显得更小的表现方式。在给出关于现实主义艺术的建议时使用，例如‘良好的透视使它看起来具有三维感。’
muted
Colors or sounds that are soft and not bright or loud. In art, it means subdued tones, like 'Use muted blues for a calm effect.'
柔和、不明亮或不响亮的颜色或声音。在艺术中，指柔和的色调，比如“使用柔和的蓝色来创造平静的效果。”
enhance
To improve or make something better. Common in feedback, e.g., 'Adding details will enhance the painting.'
改善或使某物更好。在反馈中常见，例如，'添加细节将增强这幅画。'
tweaks
Small changes or adjustments. Informal and practical for suggesting minor improvements, like 'Just a few tweaks to the colors.'
小的变化或调整。非正式且实用，用于建议小的改进，例如“只需对颜色做一些微调。”
insights
Valuable ideas or understanding about something. Use it to thank someone for helpful advice, such as 'Your insights helped a lot.'
关于某事物的宝贵想法或理解。用它来感谢某人的有益建议，例如‘你的洞见帮了大忙。’
关键句型
需要记住和练习的重要短语
Hey John, do you have a moment?
This is a polite, casual way to ask if someone is free to talk. It's useful for starting conversations without being too direct. The question form 'do you have a moment?' shows respect for the other's time.
这是一个礼貌且随意的询问某人是否有时间说话的方式。它有助于在不那么直接的情况下开启对话。疑问形式“你有空吗？”显示了对他人时间的尊重。
I'd love to get your thoughts on it.
A friendly way to ask for someone's opinion. 'I'd love to' expresses enthusiasm, and 'get your thoughts' is natural for seeking feedback. Use this when sharing creative work to invite input.
一种友好地询问别人意见的方式。'我很想'表达了热情，'听听你的想法'是寻求反馈的自然表达。在分享创意作品时，使用这个来邀请输入。
What's the main idea behind it?
This question asks about the concept or inspiration of a creative piece. It's great for showing interest. The structure uses 'what's' (what is) for informal questions in discussions.
这个问题询问创意作品的概念或灵感来源。它很适合表达兴趣。结构使用 'what's' (what is) 来表示讨论中的非正式问题。
I'm not sure if the colors quite convey the early light as well as I hoped.
Expresses doubt about whether something works as intended. 'Quite' softens the statement, and 'as well as I hoped' compares to expectations. Useful for humbly discussing your own art's shortcomings.
表达了对某物是否按预期工作的怀疑。「Quite」缓和了陈述，而「as well as I hoped」与期望进行比较。有助于谦虚地讨论自己艺术品的缺点。
The composition is strong, and I really like the way you've handled the perspective.
Gives positive feedback with specifics. 'The composition is strong' praises structure, and 'the way you've handled' explains what you like. Start with positives in constructive criticism to be encouraging.
给出具体的积极反馈。'构图很强'赞美结构，'你处理的方式'解释你喜欢什么。在建设性批评中从积极点开始以鼓励。
Maybe a touch more warmth in the sky or lighter, more muted tones on the buildings could enhance that feeling.
Suggests improvements politely with 'maybe' to avoid sounding bossy. 'A touch more' means a small amount, and 'could enhance' shows potential benefit. Ideal for giving helpful advice on art.
用'maybe'礼貌地建议改进，以避免听起来像在发号施令。'A touch more'意为少量，'could enhance'显示潜在益处。适合给出关于艺术的有帮助建议。
That's really helpful feedback.
Acknowledges advice positively. 'That's really helpful' emphasizes appreciation. Use this to respond to suggestions, showing you're open to learning and building a good conversation flow.
积极认可建议。“那真是非常有用”强调了感激之情。用此回应建议，显示你对学习的开放态度，并建立良好的对话流程。
Thanks so much, John! Your insights are always so valuable.
Expresses deep gratitude. 'Thanks so much' is stronger than plain 'thanks,' and 'always so valuable' highlights ongoing appreciation. End feedback exchanges on a positive note like this.
表达了深刻的感激之情。'Thanks so much' 比单纯的 'thanks' 更强烈，'always so valuable' 突出了持续的欣赏。以这种积极的语气结束反馈交流。